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November 28, 2012
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
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1/8 second
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F/9.0
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15 mm
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100
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Nov 10, 2012, 10:31:42 AM
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Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.2 (Windows)
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I Remember You As You Were by catch---22 I Remember You As You Were by catch---22
I remember you as you were in the last autumn.
You were the grey beret and the still heart.
In your eyes the flames of the twilight fought on.
And the leaves fell in the water of your soul.

Clasping my arms like a climbing plant
the leaves garnered your voice, that was slow and at peace.
Bonfire of awe in which my thirst was burning.
Sweet blue hyacinth twisted over my soul.

I feel your eyes traveling, and the autumn is far off:
grey beret, voice of a bird, heart like a house
towards which my deep longings migrated
and my kisses fell, happy as embers.

Sky from a ship. Field from the hills:
Your memory is made of light, of smoke, of a still pond!
Beyond your eyes, farther on, the evenings were blazing.
Dry autumn leaves revolved in your soul.


~neruda
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morningstarskid Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Professional Artist
Outstanding!!!
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catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
many thanks!!
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morningstarskid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Professional Artist
welcome!!!
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politelyinsulting Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
fab colours.
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catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
thank you very much!
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
Really fabulous! :w00t:
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catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
:iconbigheartplz:
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BrightStar2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Stunning shot Dennis i think i like this angle better, where you see more of the path,
and the poem goes well, it brings a beautiful feeling while gazing along it.... :) :iconautumnplz:
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catch---22 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
thank you very much Donna!!!
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BrightStar2 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
:hug: most welcome
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