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As we close this nocturnal door, my love,
come with me, through the shadowy places.
Close your dreams, Love, enter my eyes with your skies,
spread out through my blood like a wide river.

Good-bye to cruel daylight, which dropped
into the gunneysack of the past, each day of it.
Good-bye to every ray of watches or of oranges.
O shadow, my intermittent friend, welcome!

In this ship, or water, or death, or new life,
we are united again, asleep, resurrected:
we are the night’s marriage in the blood.

I don’t know who it is who lives or dies, who rests or wakes,
but it is your heart that distributes
all the graces of the daybreak, in my breast....


~neruda

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February 21, 2011
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
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1 second
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F/9.0
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18 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
February 12, 2011
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:iconmaddyjordan:
The main thing I want you tell you is the way you framed this is fantastic. The lighthouse being in the thirds makes this very interesting and provides a good focus for the rest of the image. Adding a sort of pazazz if you will. Now the lighting is great too. It makes all the colors really pop and gives you great detail on the lighthouse and the ice sheets. It also gives good contrast that makes the viewer see a good perspective. The only negative that I see is that you may have too much space on the bottom of the picture. I think that if you cropped this up the the ice sheets it would look great and you wouldn't be distracted by the piece of land coming out of the corner. You also would not have as much negative space.
Overall, this is an amazing photo and you really don't need to change much. Great job.
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:iconjanek-sedlar:
*Janek-Sedlar Dec 13, 2012   Photographer
Peaceful...
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:iconcatch---22:
thank you Janek!
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:iconldrphotography:
This is crazy good...everything about it.
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:iconcatch---22:
well just :)

thank you very much Laura :heart:
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:iconwenxie:
~Wenxie Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous shot; I love the composition. The colours are gorgeous too.
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:iconcatch---22:
you're most kind... thank you!
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:iconkeldbach:
Exquisite, Dennis. Nothing less :nod:
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:iconcatch---22:
thank you very much Keld!
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~SelinaValeska May 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Such a breathtaking view..
Makes me want to be there :heart:
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